All numbers should be in text format unless its over 100 and it needs to be more formal, it judt seems like it was wrote in 2 minutes also add something like ' Kind regards (your name) ' at the end
Rewrite these
- Its going to be on the 15th of November 2016 at (location)
- A three course meal will be provided
EDIT: this was already due, sorry
Rewrite these
- Its going to be on the 15th of November 2016 at (location)
- A three course meal will be provided
EDIT: this was already due, sorry