I need urgent help.

[VIRU5]

I have my english assignment due, and I need urgent help. like really bad.
If i don't pass this i won't get my year 12 certificate of education, and I can't really answer this question.



b) Explain, in full correct sentences, three ways to improve the above invitation.


please. help.
:C
ITS DUE TOMORROW BTW

[Muz]

1) Use formal words
2) Use bold and italics in the text so it makes things stand out
3) Bullet points

Idk I'm shit at English

[Vinyl]

"Year 2012" Shouldn't that be "Year 12"? Other than that probably just sentence structure and dumb nerd people english stuff.

[master obi one]

be nice

[jimjacker]

at the end of served there needs to be a fullstop, but thats all I can see.

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just saw something else the bit that says '3 course meal' should be 'three course meal'

[Forgotten]

Love to see you there
Anne

Maybe Love to see you there
Regards, Anne.
? Idk lol

[Seth]

if thats yr 12 english i have a good chance of actually becoming a lawyer lmao
to improve it
a) increase the formality, such as You are offically, invited to the such and such
b) puntucate it, you are officially, invited to the formal! make it seem positive, like somewhere you actualyl would like to go.
c) Make it seem like a human is genuinely talking to you. Not a robot. I would personally, love to see you attend!

Good luck dude

[collector]

if thats yr 12 english i have a good chance of actually becoming a lawyer lmao
to improve it
a) increase the formality, such as You are offically, invited to the such and such
b) puntucate it, you are officially, invited to the formal! make it seem positive, like somewhere you actualyl would like to go.
c) Make it seem like a human is genuinely talking to you. Not a robot. I would personally, love to see you attend!

Good luck dude

Lmao nerd. Seth

[n8]

1) Use formal words
2) Use bold and italics in the text so it makes things stand out
3) Bullet points

Idk I'm shit at English

dont trust the words of someone in english studies.



@triplecdawg

[Seth]

collector idgaf if im a nerd least i will move out of my parents basement eyyyyyy and will buy a dope house where i will look down at the virgins such as yourself pew pew jk ily