I need urgent help.

[Muz]

1) Use formal words
2) Use bold and italics in the text so it makes things stand out
3) Bullet points

Idk I'm shit at English

dont trust the words of someone in english studies.



@triplecdawg

Releasing personal information, cunt get VAC banned

[VIRU5]

if thats yr 12 english i have a good chance of actually becoming a lawyer lmao
to improve it
a) increase the formality, such as You are offically, invited to the such and such
b) puntucate it, you are officially, invited to the formal! make it seem positive, like somewhere you actualyl would like to go.
c) Make it seem like a human is genuinely talking to you. Not a robot. I would personally, love to see you attend!

Good luck dude

I'm straight copy and pasting this, if I fail its your fault and you owe me 5k credits when my computer is fixed
na ty dude.

[Seth]

VIRU5 im 14 dont burden me pls.
Nah but good luck for real dude, I hope you get a decent mark on your assignment.

[sacci]

Go ask your teacher!!?? These forums aren't here to help you w/ your school work.

[PoosKi]

Go ask your teacher!!?? These forums aren't here to help you w/ your school work.

He has a point tbh. ^^^

[VIRU5]

Go ask your teacher!!?? These forums aren't here to help you w/ your school work.

It's due at the start of the lesson tomorrow, he won't help with anything. he's a 60 year old cunt, i've asked for help heaps of times but he doesn't. he doesn't help anyone at all.

[asriel]

All numbers should be in text format unless its over 100 and it needs to be more formal, it judt seems like it was wrote in 2 minutes also add something like ' Kind regards (your name) ' at the end

Rewrite these

- Its going to be on the 15th of November 2016 at (location)

- A three course meal will be provided

EDIT: this was already due, sorry

[Lunaei]

if thats yr 12 english i have a good chance of actually becoming a lawyer lmao
to improve it
a) increase the formality, such as You are offically, invited to the such and such
b) puntucate it, you are officially, invited to the formal! make it seem positive, like somewhere you actualyl would like to go.
c) Make it seem like a human is genuinely talking to you. Not a robot. I would personally, love to see you attend!

Good luck dude

you should get grandmarly it helps you check your puntu ation and it helps with ur grandma

it much melp babe <3 much lovering lunei 

[Seth]

VIRU5 tell us how you went fam

[n8]

VIRU5 tell us how you went fam

failed cause he got people like you to help